The Factory -- second edition

The Factory is an illustrated fictionnal story on bondage and sex. It is a follow-up to the story The Return of the Paramour. I initially published it in March 2021, and this is a revised version of the same story.

Download The Factory in PDF format.

Warning: The story (still) contains depictions and descriptions of people drinking coffee.

Why a second edition?

After publishing the story, I received critiques on it, and those varied widely. However, many commenters remarked that the story had too much "world-building" and too little of the sexy stuff. In hindsight, I agree with that.

That said, the story builds on the reasoning why there isn't anything wrong or immoral about sex slavery. The amount of world-building could not really be reduced by much, without breaking the story "logic". So instead, I expanded on the descriptions of the bondage. The story is now about a fifth longer.

Another reason is that I was never happy with the ending, but at the time I didn't know how to get it right. This second edition has an ending that I am happy with.

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The Return of the Paramour - second edition

I have reworked the story to improve the plot line. The new story has ten chapters. The eight chapters of the first edition have been adjusted to snap into the new plot line. What is the story anyway? The Return of the Paramour is illustrated fiction, on young women ("paramours") who are obligated to regularly have sex with their patron. They do so in bondage, because the old medieval laws on seigneurial privileges and bondswomen are no longer in effect and modern (contract) law is not binding enough. The link (single PDF file for all 10 chapters) The Return of the Paramour (full) Synopsis 1. The paradox of freedom In which the narrator is captivated by a new kind of erotic roleplay, and offers his assistance to an adult video producer that focuses on this roleplay. 2. The legacy of paramours In which the narrator learns that the kinky roleplay is inspired by the new bondage toys of an earlier group, and that this earlier group was in turn inspired by a naughty pra...

The Factory

The Factory is a follow-up to the story The Return of the Paramour . The new story has a few references to its predecessor (mostly implicit, by mentioning names that were introduced in the earlier story). Download The Factory in PDF format. Like its predecessor, The Factory is illustrated fiction on bondage and sex, both (presumably) non-consensual. Warning : the story contains depictions and descriptions of people drinking coffee.

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