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The Factory -- second edition

The Factory is an illustrated fictionnal story on bondage and sex. It is a follow-up to the story The Return of the Paramour . I initially published it in March 2021, and this is a revised version of the same story.   Download The Factory in PDF format. Warning : The story (still) contains depictions and descriptions of people drinking coffee. Why a second edition? After publishing the story, I received critiques on it, and those varied widely. However, many commenters remarked that the story had too much "world-building" and too little of the sexy stuff. In hindsight, I agree with that. That said, the story builds on the reasoning why there isn't anything wrong or immoral about sex slavery. The amount of world-building could not really be reduced by much, without breaking the story "logic". So instead, I expanded on the descriptions of the bondage. The story is now about a fifth longer. Another reason is that I was never happy with the ending, but at the time