The Return of the Paramour, update

While drawing the illustrations, I kept on rewriting the individual chapters. A few chapters were redone completely. The intent of the story is that each chapter is self-contained, but so that the individual chapters don't say much. The real story is in the cross-links: a name that pops up in two different chapters, for example.

In rereading chapter 8, it dawned to me that in this rewriting I broke such a connection, one that is important to get a grasp of what is the real topic of the story. I fixed this by making a minor modification to chapter 3. The link of the downloads below is now corrected.

In addition, I have put all chapters in a ZIP file for a single download.
Get it at: http://ul.to/jw5ktpbb

The rewrites did leave a few unexplained "clues" in the illustration. For example, on page 48 (chapter 8), there is a green box in the trolley that has the caption "Exciter Trainer Kit", but the exciter is shown to come in the pink box. It is never explained what the "trainer kit" is. In the same picture, the "official" that guards the three prepared girls holds a remote control in her hand. It is never explained what that the remote control does. Maybe there should once be added a chapter 9.

Note: there is a second edition of the story. It does indeed have a chapter 9 (and a chapter 10 as well), but both the trainer kit and the remote control have been completely removed from the story (and the pictures).

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